Mate for Arumi?

[Arumi Sokia]

A dark gray wolf padded onto a snowy cliff. She longed for a mate. She tilted her head back and howled a symphany of beauty. Hoping for a reply.

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Hello Ashley,

I though I'd be helpful and give you a bit of information, remind you of the rules it you haven't read them, and a few tips, see as you need some guidance here.

First off, this is the Plots area, were the creators of their characters discuss plot ideas among each other for each of their characters. You here have used it as an RPGing area. If you want to RP, when on the Home Page, the several areas that we call the Lands is were we all RP. I just didn't want you to think your being ignored when we actually only RP among the Home Page.

Second off, the rules state that you need a different account for each character you have. Yes you can have a main account, like some of the staff, but the rules do want you to have a separate account for each wolf. If you want to use this account only for your character Arumi, then just change the viewing name to her full name. I would also like to mention, that though we put no limit on word amount, we do like having high literacy, which means what we would like to see is a bit more sentencing, even if it's a bit of rambling from the character's past or more to what the character is doing, like if the character has a limp, you could describe the limp and such. But fluff is out, so no repeating sentences. As well, we expect good spelling and punctuation.

A few tips, on your sentence "She tilted her head back and howled a symphany of beauty. Hoping for a reply." you have spelled symphony wrong. There are sites that do spell check, including here in the modify post/ making thread area. As well, you could make the sentence longer and add commas. For your sentence, you could of done the following: "She tilted her head back and howled a symphony of beauty, hoping for a reply." Any who, to help you get an idea of what we expect, I'll give you a sample of how I would of written your sentence. "The she-wolf sucked in her breath, holding it for a moment before she raised her head to the sky and howled her melody of her voice into the air, hoping for a call back to her own."

I hope I was helpful and do not take it as an offense as I was only trying to help you. Thank you and have a nice night/day.

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[Arumi Sokia]

Um..okXD